Goldilocks and the Three Fish

I've been working on a narrative, It's kind of a mix up, it's like 'Goldilocks and the Three Bears' but I swapped the three bears with the three fish.

Goldilocks and the Three Fish.

One afternoon there was a girl named Goldilocks, she was wandering in the forest after she had an argument with her parents. She was a little scared. Goldilocks was counting on her gut on where to go. Tree’s were whistling, grass was swaying and tree branches were rolling around.

She saw a little stream, so she followed it. She found a pond at the end of the stream. She was so hot from walking she tasted the water, she liked it, so she had some more. She rested by some rocks feeling tired. She was puffing.

Once Goldilocks cooled down she took her pink sparkling shoes off and put her smelly feet in the water. The rocks were slimy, she found some seaweed and moved her feet into the seaweed, it tickled her feet and she started laughing and splashed her feet around.

Taking another sip, Goldilocks drags up strings of slimy  seaweed with her feet, just then some fish were swimming around, Goldilocks saw the fish and thought “I just drank fish water”. She stood up, and put her shoes on and ran, she started spitting and thinking “Yakk I drank fish water”.  Goldilocks comes back home yelling “ I drank fish water”. A few Days later Goldilocks got sick, so Goldilocks promised her parents that she would never go in the woods again.